As usually, I changed the pattern here and there. Used fingering instead of sport, thin polyester thread for the bands lining, rust color instead of red, bell sleeves instead of tailored fit, added short rows for breasts and rear neck.

I agree the original body pattern is too geometrical, so I used the chart from other Ravelry projects. Edited it a bit to look more balanced, reduced to 12 st repeat.

Overall it is a very interesting pattern to knit, though requires a good deal of work, including sewing and embroidery.

12 x 48